1. The Antarctic has important role in regulating the weather on the Earth because of the mix of the cold flows around it and warm water. However, human has made this controlling system in danger.
2. The twenties is considered as the decade of big change in America culture. For example, jazz replaced classical music and the flapper appeared in the first time. Also, police did nothing to curb crime.
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Nice job - I have some very minor questions for you:1. The Antarctic has important role in regulating the weather on the Earth because of the mix of the cold flows around it and warm water. However, human [only one human?] has made this controlling system in danger.
2. The twenties is considered as the decade of big change in America culture. For example, jazz replaced classical music and the flapper appeared in the first time. Also, police did nothing to curb crime. [How are these examples related? You could introduce them by saying, "the strongest examples are.....]
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